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Daft Scarlet Sky

I saw her under a tall lilac tree A piece of scarlet sky looking tipsy Was the fervent look calling thee or me? Whatever, I went to respond in glee Alas it flew away on the top of Calling me in gestures orange and mauve A lovely she with eyes airy and suave Should I? Flashed in the photo of Pavlov October 23, 2017

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Date: 10/27/2017 3:42:00 PM
Interesting work..Great descriptive work..I can see a colorful sunrise or sunset in the lines..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/28/2017 8:19:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 10/24/2017 7:52:00 AM
Great imagery my friend..
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Date: 10/24/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Silent ...
Date: 10/23/2017 12:38:00 PM
Daft indeed, good work Probir...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/24/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thank you, Charlie ...
Date: 10/23/2017 12:24:00 PM
Fabulously surreal!! A tipsy piece of scarlet sky, love it :) my best to you for the contest!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 10/24/2017 9:57:00 AM
Thank you so much ...

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