Daffodils on Rolling Hills

      Daffodils on rolling hills
         Tulips in full bloom
       A rose emerges every hour
         Aroma of peonies in my room

       Dad burn it, I Hate Spring
         It’s far too aromatic
       Earth's rebirth blots out mine
         ~ Alas, I’m highly asthmatic
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Tor Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 6:56 PM
your displeasure shouldn't be mine. My wife is the same way Gershon i can't open the windows she will feed me to the lions if I do my friend...
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April 2, 2025 at 3:09 PM
The flip side in a nutshell. I don’t suffer from allergies but I know people who do and spring can be almost intolerable for them. I like to buy them a nice bouquet to cheer them up
Rodrigues Avatar
April 2, 2025 at 11:00 AM
Well “Dad burn it” Hope there’s no oils scented with pollen!
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April 1, 2025 at 10:46 AM
Hi Gershon the only bad thing about spring is suffering from hayfever.
Elliott Avatar
April 1, 2025 at 5:19 AM
I hear you, Gershon. We had a high pollen count last month. My daughter has several allergies and they are acting up. Great penning. Shalom :)
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