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With warm caresses from the sun daffodils and crocuses sprout, as the tulips start popping out. The fight for my heart has begun, snowdrops versus snowflakes of white, both are such a delightful sight. Winter's defeated, Spring has won, life's revival tends to trump death, its presence inhaled with each breath. And soon sugary sap will run, an elixir for budding leaves it allows green to paint the trees. As moths emerge from cocoons, spun, they join butterflies in the air, an open space they both can share. With warm caresses from the sun, the fight for my heart has begun. Winter's defeated, Spring has won and soon, sugary sap will run, as moths emerge from cocoons, spun.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 3/28/2018 9:42:00 AM
Great form and execution Emile, you are becoming quite adept at this form, it is quite appealing I have to try one one day. I see congrats are in order, so kudos to you!!
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Date: 3/28/2018 11:06:00 AM
Thanks so much John, your visits are a true treat my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/22/2018 9:53:00 AM
Wonderful Emile....;-)
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Date: 3/22/2018 1:08:00 PM
Thanks Keith, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/4/2018 5:36:00 PM
This is so beautiful, Emile! Like eye candy! Congrats!
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Date: 3/5/2018 9:33:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I truly appreciate your support and encouragement my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/4/2018 12:34:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats. Bravo, Emile.
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Date: 3/4/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Line, I truly appreciate all of your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/4/2018 10:46:00 AM
Congrats Emile, much enjoyed :)
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Date: 3/4/2018 3:17:00 PM
Thanks Gary, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Date: 3/1/2018 10:31:00 AM
A new fav
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Date: 3/1/2018 3:27:00 PM
Thanks Anna, I appreciate your loyal support my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 11:36:00 PM
What a beautiful and uplifting poem, Emile. A joy to read. Beautiful form well mastered.
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:40:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I enjoyed your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 11:28:00 PM
Welcome SPRING. So rhythmic and nice. I admire. Hugs
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Date: 3/1/2018 8:39:00 AM
Thanks Anisha, I enjoyed your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 1:44:00 PM
Such beautiful imagery from the first to the ladt word and spring sure has won the battle and winter has had to let go of her grip on earth (except for today on our little island has been hit by snow and schools are closed lol) a delightful Constance, I have only written one of this challenging form:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 2/28/2018 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Jan, I always look forward to your reviews you have such a kind heart my friend, Emile.
Date: 2/28/2018 11:45:00 AM
I fully enjoyed this beautiful poem Emile. :)
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Date: 2/28/2018 12:53:00 PM
Thanks so much Heidi, I enjoyed your comment my friend, Emile.

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