Daffodils

Daffodils of gold wind their way through heaven's green pastures 
As angels whisper through the meadows of my mind 
Fragrance forgotten through the passing years 
Forever dormant, lingers in sphere of time  
Ominously transparent in the shells of life
Done now are things I cannot change   
If only I could return the fragrance that I stole
Letting you know that I seek forgiveness
Soon all seasons would shower daffodils


4/9/15

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Sandra Haight

Date: 12/26/2015 4:57:00 PM

Judy, congratulations on your win and placement in Skat's 'Flower' Old Poems contest. Hugs, Sandra

Judy Konos
Date: 12/26/2015 10:15:00 PM

Thank you Sandra....appreciate your stopping...

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/26/2015 9:18:00 AM

Congrats on your win with this great acrostic poetry!!

Judy Konos
Date: 12/26/2015 10:15:00 PM

Robert...always good to see you.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/25/2015 9:04:00 PM

Judy, Congrats on your flower win. Love Linda

Judy Konos
Date: 12/26/2015 10:16:00 PM

Destroyer....in that cute Santa hat....hello and glad to see you...

Skat A

Date: 12/25/2015 8:17:00 PM

JUDY, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting the Skat Flower Contest theme. :) Stop by and enjoy the flowers on Skat's Latest blog. "Sounds Like A Yes :)" You might pick a flower or two. MERRY CHRISTMAS

Judy Konos
Date: 12/26/2015 10:17:00 PM

I might pick an entire bunch....thanks for the invite...

Wally Flint

Date: 4/29/2015 12:13:00 PM

Nice poem Judy. Loved the ending!

Judy Konos
Date: 3/9/2016 4:22:00 PM

Very late getting back to you....but many thanks...come join Soupers on facebook...we're having fun....

Julia Ward

Date: 4/12/2015 3:16:00 PM

I like the imagery you created, Judy. Julia, :)

Judy Konos
Date: 4/12/2015 5:49:00 PM

thank you

Emile Pinet

Date: 4/11/2015 4:05:00 PM

A lonely look at a moment of reflection just as the weight of reality crushed the magic within. Emile.

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 4/10/2015 2:15:00 AM

Love the second line the most, great write Judy! Perfect 7 for this!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/9/2015 11:31:00 PM

this is gorgeous, Judy . One of the best I saw tonight SEVEn

Jan Allison

Date: 4/9/2015 8:43:00 AM

simply stunning Judy - one of my own personal favourites of my poems is heavenly herald - also about this delightful flower:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Judy Konos
Date: 4/13/2016 8:39:00 AM

hey I was trying to distinguish between the ABC form and the Ab..well whatever it is for the spring flowers contest going on now...and I DON'T UNDERSTAND it...they both appear to be the same thing? By the way thanks for stopping here April 9, 2015....LOL