Daffodils

Daffodils of gold wind their way through heaven's green pastures 
As angels whisper through the meadows of my mind 
Fragrance forgotten through the passing years 
Forever dormant, lingers in sphere of time  
Ominously transparent in the shells of life
Done now are things I cannot change   
If only I could return the fragrance that I stole
Letting you know that I seek forgiveness
Soon all seasons would shower daffodils


4/9/15
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Haight Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 4:57 PM
Judy, congratulations on your win and placement in Skat's 'Flower' Old Poems contest. Hugs, Sandra
Konos Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Thank you Sandra....appreciate your stopping...
Lindley Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 9:18 AM
Congrats on your win with this great acrostic poetry!!
Konos Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 10:15 PM
Robert...always good to see you.....
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December 25, 2015 at 9:04 PM
Judy, Congrats on your flower win. Love Linda
Konos Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 10:16 PM
Destroyer....in that cute Santa hat....hello and glad to see you...
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December 25, 2015 at 8:17 PM
JUDY, Congratulations on your win. Thank you for supporting the Skat Flower Contest theme. :) Stop by and enjoy the flowers on Skat's Latest blog. "Sounds Like A Yes :)" You might pick a flower or two. MERRY CHRISTMAS
Konos Avatar
December 26, 2015 at 10:17 PM
I might pick an entire bunch....thanks for the invite...
Flint Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 12:13 PM
Nice poem Judy. Loved the ending!
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March 9, 2016 at 4:22 PM
Very late getting back to you....but many thanks...come join Soupers on facebook...we're having fun....
Ward Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 3:16 PM
I like the imagery you created, Judy. Julia, :)
Konos Avatar
April 12, 2015 at 5:49 PM
thank you
Pinet Avatar
April 11, 2015 at 4:05 PM
A lonely look at a moment of reflection just as the weight of reality crushed the magic within. Emile.
A. Sharma Avatar
April 10, 2015 at 2:15 AM
Love the second line the most, great write Judy! Perfect 7 for this!
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 11:31 PM
this is gorgeous, Judy . One of the best I saw tonight SEVEn
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 8:43 AM
simply stunning Judy - one of my own personal favourites of my poems is heavenly herald - also about this delightful flower:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
Konos Avatar
April 13, 2016 at 8:39 AM
hey I was trying to distinguish between the ABC form and the Ab..well whatever it is for the spring flowers contest going on now...and I DON'T UNDERSTAND it...they both appear to be the same thing? By the way thanks for stopping here April 9, 2015....LOL
Hopper Avatar
April 9, 2015 at 7:43 AM
Lovely write! Thanks for sharing! God bless,
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April 9, 2015 at 7:05 AM
- Touching beautiful, Judy - I wish you a wonderful day :) - // Anne-Lise :)
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