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Daffodils

...with apologies to WW I wandered lonely as a cloud until my feet got wet. I struggled through the undergrowth and found myself beset by insects all around, my temper wholly spent, to hell with yellow daffodils and my predicament!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/29/2012 9:12:00 PM
lol wow what a man goes through to just pick a few flowers lol lovely!
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Date: 5/29/2012 8:28:00 PM
Tee hee! doesn't get any better than this! A rant to make me smile :) Soup Mail
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Date: 5/29/2012 5:16:00 PM
And so spoke the poet to end the romantic age that kept us nauseated with ourselves ... what age is this again. Love the boldness, Keith, and it is funny too. Nice write.
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Date: 5/29/2012 3:09:00 PM
ha! i've always loved that daffodil poem, but i very much enjoyed your "to hell with yellow daffodils" line. i think your line will stick in my mind even more than the original!
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Date: 5/29/2012 1:21:00 PM
.....beautiful yellow daffodils.....lol....not nice Keith, but I love it.....:) - oxox Anne-Lise
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