Daffodils

Gentle breeze heads nod - 
Opening buds, dew drop kissed - 
Majestic crowns lift.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Dietrich Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 9:52 AM
Majectic crowns lift. I just love that! I saw your name under someone's poem and just had to see your work. I had a friend in England with that name Anna-Marie! LUv, Andrea
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February 28, 2010 at 9:36 AM
This is a beautiful haiku, Anna-Marie. (Boo Hoo, my daffodils haven't bloomed yet! But their up!) Spring is near and I can hardly wait. I hope all is well with you. Smiles, Dane Ann
Devonshire Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 8:15 AM
What a beautiful haiku, Anna-Marie! This is a very poetic view of spring unfolding. "Majestic crowns lift" is a lovely way to describe the beauty that adorns our flowers. Thank you for this breath of spring! Much love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 6:24 AM
Beautifully written Haiku about one of my favorite items of spring. Sara
Fraser Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 5:44 AM
The beautiful Daffodil, in radiant yellows > lovely Haiku Anna-Marie, does Wales proud >> James
Palli Avatar
February 28, 2010 at 5:38 AM
excellent description and expression
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