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Daffodils

Gentle breeze heads nod - Opening buds, dew drop kissed - Majestic crowns lift.

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/28/2010 9:52:00 AM

Majectic crowns lift. I just love that! I saw your name under someone's poem and just had to see your work. I had a friend in England with that name Anna-Marie! LUv, Andrea

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 2/28/2010 9:36:00 AM

This is a beautiful haiku, Anna-Marie. (Boo Hoo, my daffodils haven't bloomed yet! But their up!) Spring is near and I can hardly wait. I hope all is well with you. Smiles, Dane Ann

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/28/2010 8:15:00 AM

What a beautiful haiku, Anna-Marie! This is a very poetic view of spring unfolding. "Majestic crowns lift" is a lovely way to describe the beauty that adorns our flowers. Thank you for this breath of spring! Much love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/28/2010 6:24:00 AM

Beautifully written Haiku about one of my favorite items of spring. Sara

James Fraser

Date: 2/28/2010 5:44:00 AM

The beautiful Daffodil, in radiant yellows > lovely Haiku Anna-Marie, does Wales proud >> James

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 5:38:00 AM

excellent description and expression