Daffodils

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Daffodil catalogue Dropped in my mailbox~yeah! Dandy dancers in breeze Dainty cups on display Daydreamers can stash some Dreams of fields bright yellow. Decide use in winter

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/11/2023 6:16:00 AM

Oh wow, such a brilliant take for the contest this is, dear Sara. I'm absolutely enjoying the beautiful 'Daffodil' ambience created here with the elegance of your mesmeric words. "Dandy dancers in breeze" Absolutely love that! "Daydreamers can stash some dreams of fields bright yellow" Gorgeously done! :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/11/2023 7:58:00 AM

Hiya, I did not enter this one in the contest. I went a different direction but it did not place. I knew it wouldn't but it did not keep it from being a good Pleiades. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2023 2:52:00 AM

Cleverly done, Sara. Best for a win.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/11/2023 2:58:00 AM

Victor, It is not an entry for the contest and probably the one I entered won't win but I liked it. LOL..Thanks for your continued support of my work. Sara

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2023 2:37:00 PM

what beautiful imagery Sara, I especially love dandy dancers in breeze:-) hugs Jan xx

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/11/2023 2:57:00 AM

Why, thank you, Jan. Yes, those dandy dancers. Daddy used to use that word dandy and he would use the phrase buck dancer. Thanks for dropping by with a smile and nice review. Sara