Daffodil

My favorite flower of
      Mother earths spring
            Daffodils of yellow
Green stems of green
      The wind blows them 
             So gentle and mellow 
Beckoning the humble
      Bee to stop on by
            Pollen collecting fellow 
Promise of warmth to come
      Longer days of sunlight 
            And more buds to say hello

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Jan Allison

Date: 3/26/2024 3:11:00 PM

lovely imagery Kelli i adore seeing daffodils in the garden, a sure sign spring has arrived:-) hugs Jan xx

Silpika Kalita

Date: 3/17/2024 6:32:00 PM

Sublime in eulogy of mother nature. Each and every element is precious. Sunny with optimum light

Kelli White
Date: 3/24/2024 7:37:00 AM

Thank you SK

James Peranteau

Date: 3/13/2024 5:40:00 PM

daffodilz excite me ....the purple and blue and yellow crocuses are go'n crazy wild on my sit...I better thin them...yep, I dig the write ;)

Kelli White
Date: 3/24/2024 7:37:00 AM

Thank you JP

Yolanda Nicholsen

Date: 3/13/2024 4:30:00 PM

This is a very lovely write filled with warmth and sunshine enjoyed reading your work.

Kelli White
Date: 3/13/2024 4:57:00 PM

Thank you very much Yolanda, happy spring, kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/13/2024 4:28:00 AM

Dear Kelli, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of spring's promise and the delicate dance of nature. Your serene picture of daffodils swaying in the breeze, inviting bees with their golden hue, reminds us of the beauty and renewal that each season brings. Your words inspire hope and anticipation for the brighter days ahead. Keep embracing the magic of nature in your poetry! - Blessings, Daniel

Kelli White
Date: 3/13/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thank you Daniel, I am so glad you saw my vision, kelli

Ink Empress

Date: 3/12/2024 4:00:00 PM

Ah so beautiful, i love daffodils too; something about them is soul warming, perhaps the brightness that reminds us that theres always light, and they symbolize beginnings and hope. I love the way youv described them and also how youve conveyed this write dear kelli. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light

Kelli White
Date: 3/12/2024 5:24:00 PM

Thank you Ink E I appreciate your honesty, Kelli

Zyrool Gifford

Date: 3/12/2024 3:06:00 PM

Beautifully done

Kelli White
Date: 3/13/2024 4:58:00 PM

Thank you Zyrool, spring is sprung, kelli