Daffodil

My favorite flower of
      Mother earths spring
            Daffodils of yellow
Green stems of green
      The wind blows them 
             So gentle and mellow 
Beckoning the humble
      Bee to stop on by
            Pollen collecting fellow 
Promise of warmth to come
      Longer days of sunlight 
            And more buds to say hello

birthfree verse

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Jan Allison

March 26, 2024 at 3:11 PM

lovely imagery Kelli i adore seeing daffodils in the garden, a sure sign spring has arrived:-) hugs Jan xx

Silpika Kalita

March 17, 2024 at 6:32 PM

Sublime in eulogy of mother nature. Each and every element is precious. Sunny with optimum light

Kelli White

March 24, 2024 at 7:37 AM

Thank you SK

James Peranteau

March 13, 2024 at 5:40 PM

daffodilz excite me ....the purple and blue and yellow crocuses are go'n crazy wild on my sit...I better thin them...yep, I dig the write ;)

Kelli White

March 24, 2024 at 7:37 AM

Thank you JP

Mrs. Yolanda Nicholsen

March 13, 2024 at 4:30 PM

This is a very lovely write filled with warmth and sunshine enjoyed reading your work.

Kelli White

March 13, 2024 at 4:57 PM

Thank you very much Yolanda, happy spring, kelli

Daniel Henry Rodgers

March 13, 2024 at 4:28 AM

Dear Kelli, Your poem beautifully captures the essence of spring's promise and the delicate dance of nature. Your serene picture of daffodils swaying in the breeze, inviting bees with their golden hue, reminds us of the beauty and renewal that each season brings. Your words inspire hope and anticipation for the brighter days ahead. Keep embracing the magic of nature in your poetry! - Blessings, Daniel

Kelli White

March 13, 2024 at 4:58 PM

Thank you Daniel, I am so glad you saw my vision, kelli

Ink Empress

March 12, 2024 at 4:00 PM

Ah so beautiful, i love daffodils too; something about them is soul warming, perhaps the brightness that reminds us that theres always light, and they symbolize beginnings and hope. I love the way youv described them and also how youve conveyed this write dear kelli. Pleasure reading your work always. Sending you light

Kelli White

March 12, 2024 at 5:24 PM

Thank you Ink E I appreciate your honesty, Kelli