Notes About The Poem

www.ronnowpoetry.com

Dad's Bark

Dad's bark is worse than his verse.
When he hits it doesn't really hurt.

The dirt outside the house is soil.
The mouse inside the house is life.

Can't escape the printer or the car, IV
bag, heart monitor, a billion trillion stars.

Snow descends, each flake unique.
My sons' friends, each infinitely

a Greek or Trojan hero. Our morals: 
hit not the girls, nor rape. Love more

than you are loved, by a little. Give
but stop before it hurts. Stand together

or fall apart. Which candidate you vote
for less important than to vote. Don't

depend or dote on leaders, housekeeper
and president are gods equally

remote. The human body is a thing of
bone, a strange upright animal, and the

telephone a mystery to other animals.
Everyone and everything is spinning

electrons and the space between.
A great crunch, inverse of big bang, 

yr big sister told.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Wigley Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 12:56 AM
I like the style- quirky, but thoughtful. Nice write. Regards, Viv
Robertson Avatar
July 2, 2015 at 5:56 PM
This poem is out of sight, in it's own right and very tight.
Hopper Avatar
May 1, 2015 at 8:26 AM
Ok, this extremely clever write has me very intrigued. I don't (yet) understand this style of poem. This had me hooked from the very beginning. Going on my favorites list. I will read again and again until I fully understand. That is the beauty in poetry though. Pulling it apart piece by piece. Analyzing and trying to know what the writer was thinking. A 7!
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace