Daddy's Overalls

My daddy was my loved hero
when I was a tiny sprite.
To walk along beside him, was
for me a great delight.
I loved the swish of  overalls
as he carried in the milk.
To me the sound was sweeter
than the soft rustle of silk.
I wondered  why my sock clad legs
would not make that unique sound.
But it really didn’t matter 
when my daddy was around.

I vowed he would be like Daddy,
the only kind I’d  marry.
I’d hear the swish of overalls
as the foaming milk he’d carry.
Although that was not to happen
in spite of my big talk,
I dressed my son in overalls
the day he learned to walk.

By:  Joyce Johnson  Won a second in Jeans contest

(they weren't called jeans in Daddy's day.)
For Nette Onclaud's contest "It's In the Jeans"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dufresne Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 5:25 PM
I just love it, Joyce. never thought of the overalls angle. beautifully incorporated into this heart warming write. masterful
Kendrick Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 1:53 PM
So good to hear of such a good relationship with your father that you wanted your son to be in his image...Congrats...Sara
Brown Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Jeans" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
Devonshire Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 9:35 AM
Dear Joyce, I'm so glad this wonderful poem placed high. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
Horne Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:44 AM
LOL, Many congrats to you, Joyce : )
Phookan Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 8:00 AM
Many congrats Joyce on your fabulous win,,Loved reading this very original write..and men came original during those days today's ones cannot hold a candle to them.What a beautiful tribute to your daddy...huggs from me for this great write!!
Mehta Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 6:28 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of nette
Guzzi Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 5:51 AM
just a great memory and such a great ending, nothing as statisfying as a good ending! Congrad's Light ^ Love
Zzzzz Avatar
June 15, 2011 at 1:25 AM
A lovely, warm write. Congratulations on your win!
Poet Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 11:57 PM
Wonderful write here Joyce.Congrats on your win.
Johnson Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 10:47 PM
Great win in the Jeans babe lots of very good entrys....You must be a distant cousin hehe. cheers babe, Don
Dietrich Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 9:24 PM
ahhh, this is so sweet. Relating them to your daddy and your son. What a cool way to recall happy memories of those men in your life. Congrats on your win with this fine poem, Joyce.
Sweetheart Avatar
June 14, 2011 at 8:25 PM
Congrats Joyce on your super second place win in the contest..with this tender write my friend..luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 2:38 PM
such a sensitive write Joyce .. a true treasure my friend.. my Grandpa wore overalls my Mom told me he always called them that.. not jeans either.. good luck in the contest .. our Daddy's gave us such special memories..luv.. good luck...
Long Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 2:27 PM
this was awesome and so creative.. good luck your friend cory
Mehta Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 2:01 PM
Beautiful dedication and tribute to your dad with the memories recollected now in tranquility, Joyce. Good luck inthe contest.
Devonshire Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 1:27 PM
Such wonderful memories of your father, Joyce. I always wanted to meet a man like my father as well. Had a great chuckle reading the last two lines. Fabulous entry for Nette's contest, dear. I hope she enjoys it as much as I did. Love, Carolyn
Foulk Avatar
June 10, 2011 at 12:56 PM
a great piece you wrote, very creative write.
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