Daddy's Lil Gurl

Everyday I wait for my dad to come home,
while he leaves me in the empty house alone,
he kissd me on my cheek,said "I won't be back for a while, hey don't look at me like that 
sweety give me a smile, he put on his hat an marched away, as I stood by the door and 
whispered please be ok, hoping his journey isn't long, I really don't know how long he'll be 
gone, he is my father and always apart of my world, this is the poem writen from daddy's lil 
gurl
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 26, 2009 at 8:36 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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May 20, 2009 at 6:32 AM
Beautiful, i love it. What a great way to express your love for you dad! -jessica
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