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Daddy's Lil Gurl

Everyday I wait for my dad to come home, while he leaves me in the empty house alone, he kissd me on my cheek,said "I won't be back for a while, hey don't look at me like that sweety give me a smile, he put on his hat an marched away, as I stood by the door and whispered please be ok, hoping his journey isn't long, I really don't know how long he'll be gone, he is my father and always apart of my world, this is the poem writen from daddy's lil gurl

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/26/2009 8:36:00 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup. I am hoping to read many more poems written by you. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/20/2009 6:32:00 AM
Beautiful, i love it. What a great way to express your love for you dad! -jessica
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