Doris Culverhouse Poet Alliteration

Daddy, Tommy Lee Kendrick Sr.

Daddy does drive Deere's down
while working with wheeled
loaders, loud loader loading
the trash trailer, timely.
Ride rocky, ride(roof, roof)
backing, beeping, buzzing.

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Thvia Shetley October 7, 2010 at 7:27 AM congratulations on being featured this week, what a great poem!

Carol Sunshine Brown October 4, 2010 at 9:58 AM Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week at PoetrySoup Doris. Love, Carol

Daver Austin October 4, 2010 at 6:49 AM Hey, Doris, you got this one in gear. Congrats on the selection. Love, Dave

Jayne Eggins October 4, 2010 at 5:13 AM you made me think of my pops John Deere tractor and some lovely memories smile thanks for that Doris much appreciated ... congratulations on being featured this week love Jayne

Harry Horsman October 4, 2010 at 1:01 AM My favourite form od poetry Doris, and you do it so well. love it. Harry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart October 3, 2010 at 9:19 PM Congrats Doris on your featured poem this week on the Soup.. a nice one to share with us all my friend with lluv..

Sara Kendrick August 12, 2009 at 4:38 PM Nicely written Alliteration. Keep writing. Mom