Daddy Are You There

SSSHHH listen Daddy are you there
SSSHHH listen I want to tell you how my day at school went
SSSHHH listen, Daddy are you there, why arn't you answering
I need you Daddy
Why arn't you there- Daddy I need a hug, I need you to hold me
and tell me it will all be okay and it will be over soon
That you are stronger than the big bright moon- Hello- Daddy
Why wont you answer are you lost
SSSHHH- listen, i don't understand
I need you to listen, I need your hand, for you to stand up and be a man
SSSHHH listen, Daddy are you there
sorry to say for he doesn't care
I suddenly fall to the ground and scream
Daddy- Daddy this isn't fair
SSSHHH- Listen Daddy I need you to come back PLEASE
I f only for a simple minute to hear of my day
SSSHHH- Daddy are you there
I need a hug for I have never felt your strong arms around me
Knowing you could have been the one to keep me safe, the one who just might have saved 
me
SSSHHH- listen, it is another lonley day that I feel that I have been betrayed
Daddy why wont you there, why don't you care
SSHHH listen
I hesr nothing and
nothing is what I have become

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 7/4/2009 12:37:00 PM
Awesome job! I like the flow of the words and the essence of the poem rerarding "DADDY." Welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Joseph
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