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Daddy

Does it satisfy you seeing the warm trickle of my tears flow down my face. Have I not been obedient, I don't understand, why do you treat me so. Honor thy mother and father, is that not what I have done. But still you grab me, you drag me and you stab me. With every angry word. You killed me but I'm still alive 'cuz I live on in you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/9/2008 7:20:00 PM
Wow, my tears flowed as I read this. I know how you feel.
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Date: 7/28/2008 5:44:00 PM
That's a really depressing, but none the less amazing poem. :)
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