Dad

I wrote this letter especially for you
I really miss you and I hope you do too
You are my eternal sunshine
Especially for you I created this rhyme

I would rather have you than a million bucks
Or than a mansion, no matter how deluxe
I am not sure you will like my poem
But know that I am completely overblown

Dad, you mean so much to me
I love you forever, that I guarantee
I anxiously await our time ahead
With impatience, I am fed

This watch is for you, I hope you will like it
Because to me, you are my biggest hit
This poem has come to an end
There are many more I would like to send
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Taylor Avatar
March 7, 2013 at 4:07 PM
Congrats, Brittany. Great tribute. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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March 6, 2013 at 9:37 PM
BRITTANY, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win, in my contest. always~ LINDA
Jones Avatar
February 1, 2013 at 12:16 PM
I am sure your dad will love your poem as much as he loves you where ever he is. Lovely poem
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