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this is a poem that my friend logan asked to write for him cause his dad died a month ago.. So this is my original work just his feelings that i made a poem about. Daddy… It’s so sad when I have to think your not here. I remember all the fun times, they still are so clear. I didn’t want this to happen, now your so far away. But I know your not suffering from any hurtful thing. The words still linger… I remember when you said, “hey bud how are you, lots of love dad.” All I have left now is pictures and memories from the past. I will always love you, and you will never be forgotten. My honor and respect are always going to be. R.I.P, I love you dad.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 3/30/2009 1:16:00 PM
very nice of you to do this tribute.john
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:53:00 PM
this is a great heartfelt write that I'm sure your friend will enjoy! nice write . with regards..... A lopez
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Date: 3/25/2009 7:44:00 PM
You touched my heart deeply, Elizabeth. My Dad died in January; I can relate to these feelings. Beautiful, tender work!
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Date: 3/25/2009 4:46:00 PM
Great poem, it must have be written from the heart.
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Date: 3/24/2009 10:52:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to your friends father, I know this touched him deeply as a loss such as this is not easy to get over..His dad is gone but never forgotten-I pray that he will find comfort and peace in all the memories left behind...You are a very special friend for writing this for him...God Bless You, Tyesha
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:47:00 PM
masterfully done-- my heart goes out to your friend
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Date: 3/24/2009 1:23:00 PM
Hi Elizabeth My oh my, what a beautiful loving tribute to your friends father. I'm sure he can feel your love and his heart is overwhelmed by you for you having written this. Take care sweety. Love Light Truth Patricia
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