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Someone had posted this form and called it sextilla, so I thought it would be listed but it was not. It gave me good practice though, so I was happy for that.

Dad was a man of good virture. He always knew what best to do. He was handsome, he had some brawn. He showed us respect, and much care. He listened to our problems there. He was the hero we leaned on.

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Date: 8/28/2018 3:12:00 AM
short and precise...i miss my dad too but the poem has no relevance to when i last saw dad. I'm grateful it made me remember of him though
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/28/2018 4:12:00 AM
All the best, Moses. Thank you for the stop by and the comment.
Date: 8/7/2018 6:29:00 PM
What a great tribute to your dad , that's great
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/7/2018 8:23:00 PM
Thank you Stephan. There is nothing like a good dad. I see by your photo you understand it.

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