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Someone had posted this form and called it sextilla, so I thought it would be listed but it was not. It gave me good practice though, so I was happy for that.

Dad

Dad was a man of good virture.
He always knew what best to do.
He was handsome, he had some brawn.
He showed us respect, and much care.
He listened to our problems there.
He was the hero we leaned on.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gava Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 3:12 AM
short and precise...i miss my dad too but the poem has no relevance to when i last saw dad. I'm grateful it made me remember of him though
Krutsinger Avatar
August 28, 2018 at 4:12 AM
All the best, Moses. Thank you for the stop by and the comment.
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August 7, 2018 at 6:29 PM
What a great tribute to your dad , that's great
Krutsinger Avatar
August 7, 2018 at 8:23 PM
Thank you Stephan. There is nothing like a good dad. I see by your photo you understand it.
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