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Da Loveliness

Her glance is a light caress Gentle curves velvet softness Smiles that charge my innerness Loved her in that dress Brought me from the darkness My blind side she would address Without her would be loneliness Her song is lilting selflessness A guru in her mindfulness Now I share her consciousness We're as one in togetherness As one through life we progress Our kinder graced by thoughtfulness Love our moments of silliness She's "Da Lovely" in times of tenderness Thoughts of losing her I repress I love her more I confess Our story ends in happiness

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Date: 4/2/2018 1:56:00 PM
A charming read, Greg.
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/2/2018 2:19:00 PM
Appreciate your thoughtful comments and the read as always, Line.
Date: 4/1/2018 3:51:00 PM
great poem it all kind of fell into place this is my first time reading a monorhyme, never heard of the monorhyme til now..it was very goood though keep writting......
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Greg Gaul
Date: 4/1/2018 4:25:00 PM
Funny coincidence, this was my first monorhyme. Thanks for the read and remark.

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