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Cyiptic Moon

Stuck on earth when I want the moon, His shining rays just make me swoon, I wish I had the strength to fight, But what in thinking is not right. As much as he appeals to me, I don't think we could really be, As both of us are strangers still, Unhappy news like a winter chill. But I will dream of none but him, Until the light in my eyes begins to dim, I gave up my hope for him you see, For the moon is not what he is to me.

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David Williams

Date: 1/13/2013 7:27:00 AM

Katanna welcome to the soup, I like this a lot...David

Cyndi Macmillan

Date: 1/9/2013 7:11:00 AM

Hello Katanna. I really enjoyed this rhyme, especially the final stanza. I thought I would also mention something which I would have wanted told to me, as a newer member on a writing site... we only have 200 spots for new poems and about 200 poets post daily -- so we do try to only post 1-3 poems in one day, so other poets do not get pushed off the page. I am fairly certain that you are just enthused to find a site to post your words, but I thought you might want a heads up, to keep the peace.:)