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Cyclical Dance of the Cousins

Dorrie Ann left Herman again. It happens on a cyclical schedule. October, January, April and July. A quad-yearly thing. We cousins take her in. Knowing in a day or two Herman will show up. Sweet, with candies and maybe flowers. He will sweet talk her back home because he is tired of frozen food. Dorrie Ann could be annoying after the second day but none of us know this because Herman’s pattern is cyclical too.

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Date: 8/1/2019 11:09:00 PM
Caren, That is a funny write, love it. I need to check up on my cousins. -Richard
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/2/2019 12:11:00 AM
You really do. It is about a relative who is much closer to a cousin but since I only have one sister I did not dare use the word sister.
Date: 8/1/2019 10:51:00 PM
"He will sweet talk her back home/ because he is tired of frozen food." hahahaaa So like a man... ;D Love it!!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/2/2019 12:12:00 AM
Thank you my pal. I hope all is well.
Date: 8/1/2019 10:27:00 PM
Good story created as a poem. And good he takes her back.))) Cyclical? Honestly, Caren you kill me! Enjoyed! Panagiota
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/2/2019 12:12:00 AM
It is cyclical. Like the stock market - easy to figure out.
Date: 8/1/2019 4:23:00 PM
ha! well-told, caren!
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/1/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Ilene. I know so many people!
Date: 8/1/2019 10:29:00 AM
I don't know whether to laugh or cry, love is fickle, enjoyed reading your poem ;0)
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 8/1/2019 6:36:00 PM
Thank you Alesia. Some of my poetry allows you to do both.

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