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Cyclic Disorder

winter in coma rains relentlessly shed tears ~ my torn thatched hut leaks 12 January 2022

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Date: 1/14/2022 2:39:00 PM
Christuraj, your haiku paints a vivid picture! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 1/12/2022 8:05:00 AM
winter, rain, tears, leaks... Your carefully chosen words, set a sad mood. This all fits together nicely. God bless you.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/12/2022 8:41:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 1/12/2022 3:38:00 AM
Wonderful write. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 1/12/2022 3:44:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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