Cyclic Disorder

winter in coma 
rains relentlessly shed tears ~
my torn thatched hut leaks


12 January 2022
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Merryman Avatar
January 14, 2022 at 2:39 PM
Christuraj, your haiku paints a vivid picture! Congrats on your win in Brian's contest! Blessings, Kim M
Awtry Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:05 AM
winter, rain, tears, leaks... Your carefully chosen words, set a sad mood. This all fits together nicely. God bless you.
Alex Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 8:41 AM
Thank you very much.
Mcintosh Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:38 AM
Wonderful write. God bless you my friend. Love, Gina
Alex Avatar
January 12, 2022 at 3:44 AM
Thank you very much.
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