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The rosebud blooms—makes its grand debut in joyous spring. Day by day, its petals open wide—all stages lead to fullness in the end. When autumn air delivers chill, its petals drop as life and death their endless duet sing. It then awaits new life next spring when The rosebud blooms—makes its grand debut © Sandra M. Haight 2014 All Rights Reserved ~8th Place~ Contest 8 Lines 7 Words Enjambment Sponsor: Rick Pairse

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Date: 11/5/2014 3:59:00 PM
the way you did yours, it really made for a great feeling of the "cycle" depicted by the form as well as the topic. VERY nice. and congrats for your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/5/2014 6:43:00 PM
"Thanks, Andrea. I always appreciate your positive comments. Sandra"
Date: 11/3/2014 11:24:00 AM
I'm glad to see you placing Sandra. I find this absolutely beautiful.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2014 2:54:00 PM
Thank you so much, Brenda. A appreciate your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/3/2014 9:24:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2014 2:55:00 PM
Hi. Dr. Sharma, it's so nice of you to stop by with your positive comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 10:40:00 PM
What a beautiful write, Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/3/2014 2:56:00 PM
Hi Maurice, thank you so much for your encouragning comment and congratulations. Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful, exquisite piece with great sensory appeal! Congratulations on a well-deserved win, my friend! Pandita
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/2/2014 9:07:00 PM
Hi Pandita, thank you for your positive comment and congrats! Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 6:15:00 PM
NIce work, I enjoyed the read and the grand debut...congrats. BG
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/2/2014 6:45:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara. I appreciate your nice comment. Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 2:26:00 PM
such delightful imagery Sandra many congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/2/2014 4:43:00 PM
Hi Jan, thanks so much for your positive comment and congratulations. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/2/2014 12:51:00 PM
The beauty of each new spring.....and the beauty of decay.... "A Grand Debut" Great imagery!!!!!!!ENJOYED ////CONGRATS!!!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/2/2014 4:41:00 PM
Thank you, Rick. It was a pleasure to participate in your contest. Sandra
Date: 10/20/2014 1:43:00 PM
Very pretty Sandra.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/21/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thanks, Brenda. Made a revision which seems to make it flow better. Sandra
Date: 10/20/2014 10:23:00 AM
Very nice poem Sandra! Good luck in the contest! Blessings! xxxx D
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Sandra Haight
Date: 10/21/2014 10:09:00 AM
Thanks, Dorian, for your supportive comment. I really appreciate it. Sandra

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