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November 28, 2024

"In The Cycle Of Existence" Poetry Contest

Sponsor: Anoucheka Gangabissoon

A painting on my easel… a portrait of ultimate truth. at twilight, the setting sun glimmering onto the sapphire waves of the ocean, the gossamer light of the melting rays shimmering, on the dock, gray and cracked! at dawn, the sun will bring back the warmth, for all creatures to rise and soar! Life is a cycle, a wheel of existence! Birth, Youth, Death - an eternal journey from beginning to end, ultimately blending with the universe! in the middle, joys and hopes, sorrows and cries, carry us through the strenuous paths of the darkness in the world! A baby’s birth, most delightful event in human reality, our path leads us to either success or failure, but we are not defeated! we walk many miles throughout our life, to find happiness and peace, envisaging children follow our footsteps, when we cease to exist, we pass the torch to the next generation who carries the legacy, the strength, the courage to fight, to declare - life does not stop, it continues to move on to everlasting goals !

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Date: 11/28/2024 10:37:00 PM
A profound truth on life deeper spheres. I love how you incorporate this truth into your awesome painting. Wonderfully woven thoughts. Thank you for sharing your creations both art and poetry. Stay prolific. ^__^ JCB
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 11/29/2024 10:15:00 AM
Dear JCB, I missed your presence and missed your uplifting comments for a while. I know very well, how great a painter you are! Hope you are coming back soon with your amazing poetry!

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