Holly Bohto Poet Free verse

Cycle of Attraction

I cried tonight
Thinking of
your touch
Baby I wanted 
the thought of you
so much
But I had
to let you go
You can't take away
the things you did
Making me broke
down and sad
Oh God
I still want
you so much
My one and
only true love

I cried tonight
Thinking of 
His touch
Baby I wanted 
the thought of him
so much
But I had
to let him go
He can't take away
the things he did
Making me broke
down and sad
Oh God
I still want 
him so much
My one and
only true love

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Pace Ink-U-Script June 30, 2016 at 12:37 AM Very creative in the manner you wrote this...really enjoyed reading. :) Holly Bohto June 30, 2016 at 3:31 PM Thank you so much. You gave me an ah ha moment. This was written in the throws of the emotion, while I was crying and feeling this deeply. Other poems people have responded to are written in the same manner. Thank you again.