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Cycle Logical

a psychological exercise is not... a cycle-logical exert of eyes... it be a philosophical excise of a knot... a full-loss-of-fee free... for extra eyes... stan sand

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Clifford Villalon

Date: 3/26/2023 6:53:00 AM

Your philosophy is expressed in poetry. Thank you Sir for the visit. I'm privileged for being greeted today. Thanks again. Cliff

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/23/2022 1:29:00 PM

Aye aye..' it's all subjective, often retrospective.'

Sand Blown
Date: 11/2/2022 7:16:00 PM

thanks man....a cyclic logic can undo a mental knot full-of-sophical binds

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/23/2022 1:28:00 PM

Aye aye..' it's all subjective, often retrospective.'

Jim Slaughter

Date: 10/20/2022 11:27:00 AM

I like it, stan. Isn't that how all words came/come into being?

Sand Blown
Date: 10/21/2022 10:59:00 AM

...correctamundo....many many words today are actually 'shortened older phrases'....metaphors and the like.... examples...philosophy--> full loss of fee/why...or...fill loss of fee/why....phil awes sophy...full loss of ease/why.....fill loss of ease/why.....etc

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/14/2022 7:54:00 PM

I agree with Deb; I was attempting to understand your writing but couldn't figure out what you were saying. However, this one was quite creative, thanks for your comment on my page.

Sand Blown
Date: 10/15/2022 3:54:00 PM

thank you...experimenting with language appreciates feedback .....clarity can be something with a 'problematic' relatively..... stan

Deb M

Date: 10/7/2022 6:19:00 PM

Hi Stan….i have read your poetry before but to be honest didn’t quite understand it “however”after reading them on your actual page and reading the comments I now get it Ha! Breakthrough!!I’m a little slow of the mark hehe! I really have enjoyed reading them…..Cheers Debx

Sand Blown
Date: 10/9/2022 12:04:00 PM

...thanks man....wording 'ideas' be a little like...looking for a standard popped corn kernal....oh well.....have a good one

David Kavanagh

Date: 10/7/2022 11:22:00 AM

Another one of your expertly crafted pieces Stan, full loss of eyes indeed, a blinder, cheers David

Sand Blown
Date: 10/7/2022 5:50:00 PM

...i thank your....full-office-sir.....(in case this is about my writing on the wall of the po...at tree...cofcof : ) ....... stan sand