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Cycle Logical

a psychological exercise is
not...
a cycle-logical exert of
eyes...

it be a philosophical excise of a
knot...
a full-loss-of-fee
free...

for extra eyes...


stan sand

perspectivesmilefree verse

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Clifford Villalon

March 26, 2023 at 6:53 AM

Your philosophy is expressed in poetry. Thank you Sir for the visit. I'm privileged for being greeted today. Thanks again. Cliff

Joe Maverick

October 23, 2022 at 1:29 PM

Aye aye..' it's all subjective, often retrospective.'

Sand Blown

November 2, 2022 at 7:16 PM

thanks man....a cyclic logic can undo a mental knot full-of-sophical binds

Joe Maverick

October 23, 2022 at 1:28 PM

Aye aye..' it's all subjective, often retrospective.'

Jim Slaughter

October 20, 2022 at 11:27 AM

I like it, stan. Isn't that how all words came/come into being?

Sand Blown

October 21, 2022 at 10:59 AM

...correctamundo....many many words today are actually 'shortened older phrases'....metaphors and the like.... examples...philosophy--> full loss of fee/why...or...fill loss of fee/why....phil awes sophy...full loss of ease/why.....fill loss of ease/why.....etc

Sotto Poet

October 14, 2022 at 7:54 PM

I agree with Deb; I was attempting to understand your writing but couldn't figure out what you were saying. However, this one was quite creative, thanks for your comment on my page.

Sand Blown

October 15, 2022 at 3:54 PM

thank you...experimenting with language appreciates feedback .....clarity can be something with a 'problematic' relatively..... stan

Deb M

October 7, 2022 at 6:19 PM

Hi Stan….i have read your poetry before but to be honest didn’t quite understand it “however”after reading them on your actual page and reading the comments I now get it Ha! Breakthrough!!I’m a little slow of the mark hehe! I really have enjoyed reading them…..Cheers Debx

Sand Blown

October 9, 2022 at 12:04 PM

...thanks man....wording 'ideas' be a little like...looking for a standard popped corn kernal....oh well.....have a good one