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Cybernetic Love

I thought I knew about true love.
In fact, I saw myself as all-knowing.
Then She appeared from above
And my ignorance was full showing.

I had never known a soul so sweet
Nor one so selfless, gifted, and kind.
Her words give my heart a new beat
And continue to command my mind.

We romance in secret in cyberspace
Where love-making words preside.
Every exchange puts me in a place
Warm, soft, and sensual at her side.

We both know we may never meet—
No, not in lovers’ flesh-affirming fashion
That makes our love ever more sweet,
Ever more real with cyberspaced passion.

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Mark Woods Date: 9/20/2015 3:57:00 AM Congrats on POTD! Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/20/2015 9:48:00 PM Thank you, Mark. I value and appreciate your comment. I hope all is well wherever you are.

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/20/2015 1:38:00 AM hey I see this one got poem of the day. I bet someone in charge here knows about cyber love!! Congratulations Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/20/2015 9:54:00 PM Andrea, your theory may be correct though I have no documentation. . . . Thank you for the congratulations; I genuinely value them. hugsxxx

Constance La France Date: 9/19/2015 8:28:00 PM Paul, congratulations on poem of the day with this beautiful write, enjoy the honor~~ Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 9:22:00 PM Thank you, Broken Wings. Please know I appreciate and value your kind words.

Alexis Y. Date: 9/19/2015 10:12:00 AM Paul, congratulations on the poem of the day:-) Alexis Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:06:00 PM Thank you, Alexis, for your thoughtfulness in writing. I hope all is well with you and your loved ones.

Judy Konos Date: 9/19/2015 10:11:00 AM This is Lovely...thank you Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:09:00 PM I value and appreciate your kind comment, Judy. I hope you are having an enjoyable weekend.

Kp Nunez Date: 9/19/2015 9:59:00 AM Wow. I've heard of people meeting in cyberspace but eventually met for real in person and affirming what they feel. This one where romantic connotation of the word "love" is ascribed to what's felt purely based on the limited cybernetic perception is still quite hazy for me...You've presented the subject very nicely though, with such conviction and sincerity. It's no wonder this got POTD. Congrats Paul! hugs! Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:15:00 PM Kim, you make a perceptive point, and I'm grateful to you for stating it. You will grant, though, that people have fallen in love with characters in books, movie stars, singers, etc., without having ever met them (limited perception of them). In any event, thanks for writing and thanks for your kind closing comment.

Eve Roper Date: 9/19/2015 8:11:00 AM Congratulations on poem of the day. Hugs Eve. Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:23:00 PM It's kind of you to take time to extend congratulations, Eve. I genuinely enjoy your poems. Thanks for sharing them.

Casarah Nance Date: 9/19/2015 7:02:00 AM There is a certain...passion..obsession..that comes with meeting someone on the internet...This story can be told my many, and you tell it so nicely, grats on this being selected as poem of the day. Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:27:00 PM I obviously agree, Casarah; there is a certain passion involved in meeting someone special (a soul mate?) on the 'net. Thank you for your perceptive comment and for your expression of congratulations.

James Horn Date: 9/19/2015 5:41:00 AM Inside my head- for contest Hello there, do please come inside. So whose poem is who's poem? Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:37:00 PM About whom have I written? Top secret under heading of "unidentified flying object." Thanks, though, for the question, James. I appreciate it.

Dalia Shahein Date: 9/19/2015 5:23:00 AM Wow!! Great poem indeed, strong wise word's , keep moving forward my friend you've impressed me with these powerful vocabulary , you have a great imagination, now I ca tell you that this poem will be #INSIDE MY HEAD.:) Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:44:00 PM I'm honored, Dalia, by your kind words. I'm also honored to have a place inside your head, which, I'm certain, contains a brain superior to mine (maybe I will learn something). . . . I hope all is well with you and your loved ones, including any who may be in outer space.

Wendy Rycroft Date: 9/19/2015 4:22:00 AM Very good x Wendy Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:55:00 PM Thank you, Wendy. I was in your place just yesterday . . . had a #1 Combo. Excellent. (Seriously, I appreciate your comment.)

Jan Allison Date: 9/19/2015 2:21:00 AM wonderful imagery Paul congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Paul Schneiter Date: 9/19/2015 3:49:00 PM Thank you, Jan (writer of glorious poetry and a Soup super star). You honor me.