Cutting Words

words cut me razor
ignore me replace me now
but i still love you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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May 19, 2013 at 2:02 PM
Jason, Congratulations on your Featured Poem of the week. Take Care *Linda
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May 9, 2013 at 9:20 PM
Jason, your poem is very enjoyable, :-) Wishing you a nice warm welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community to be one of the best. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please look me up by clicking on my name anytime you're on line. I'm looking forward in becoming your #1 poetry soup fan. Please keep me posted every time you post a poem <3 LUV ~*~SKAT"
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May 2, 2013 at 9:15 PM
about your haiku: it is deep and it cuts like love. I like words that don't cut. However, love is a must... and my blade is getting dull... enjoyed your first poem on the soup...Linda
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May 2, 2013 at 9:14 PM
Hello Jason, Welcome to poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. If you like, please consider checking out my contest in the future. SOME ARE FUN : -) You can find the contest page by clicking on the top left hand side. You will find many different contests to choose from. I’m looking forward in reading and following your poems right now and the future. If you ever want or need feedback on a certain poem, please look me up. I can't wait to read what you highly recommend. You can always stop by and say hi if you like. Keep me posted when you post your next poem…. Thank you ~ Always & Forever *LINDA
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May 2, 2013 at 2:05 AM
Clever ! Great summary of the way we expose our deep thoughts through our love of words. I used the theme in my poem "Ulteriority"-- yes there is a word spelt that way courteousy of Robert Frost :)
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