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Cutting the Ties

Why wouldn’t you cut me loose from the strings that bind us You had left me dangling from a marriage that once united us together The bonds were broken - you had forsaken our love, not once but so many many times For over a year now you have been seeing her I could never understand why you wouldn’t set me free and let me spread my wings and fly I‘d have the chance to find someone who would be faithful and love me – ONLY me Yet you still chose to wear my ring upon your finger You wanted to have your cake and to eat it too Whilst I was suspended like a puppet floundering in mid air At first I thought it was all about saving face - playing happy families You didn’t want your parents to see YOU as a failure It was always me who visited them every week Running errands and taking them on days out with the grandchildren You simply paid your parents lip service and rang them saying you are working away, when in reality was you really were with her But now I have discovered the truth why you won’t let me go - your father let it slip one day when I saw him. It was his birthday and you’d asked me to take him a bottle of his favourite whiskey - this was your downfall - you know how he likes to talk when he’s had a drop For now I have discovered the truth the REAL reason why you wouldn’t set me free. It’s all to do with money – the clause from your uncle’s will. You were his favourite nephew and I could never understand why you didn’t inherit when he died Now I know the answer - we needed to remain married for fifteen years then and only then would you receive your million-dollar legacy Ever since your father revealed the truth about the inheritance I have had a private detective trail the two of you – dates, times, photographs I have all the evidence I needed. The private detective I hired – oh he was delighted to take on the case - you see SHE is his soon to be ex-wife Well sugar I’m filing for divorce. Don’t bother contesting it. It will be finalised on our 14th Wedding Anniversary. I’m no longer your puppet, the strings that tied us are finally going to be cut. Contest:Puppets Sponsor John Lawless 12~25~14

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Date: 12/26/2014 9:45:00 PM
wow, what a GREAT story, Jan. Unique entry into the contest. You are just a creative maestro these days. Hey, let me know if I missed any poems of yours recently~~
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/27/2014 6:11:00 AM
I don't know where the inspiration for this came from it just appeared! Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/26/2014 10:59:00 AM
brilliant Jan.....I'm with Arthur...you should have cut something else off....hugs Tim
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Date: 12/26/2014 11:11:00 AM
I did - his inheritance - maybe his new love can cut off his crown jewels!!!lol :-) Hugs jan x
Date: 12/26/2014 8:09:00 AM
It's amazing how inspiration can take us on journeys to the unknown. An interesting take on the subject Jan. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 12/26/2014 9:35:00 AM
Its VERY different for me Brenda lol - not sure I like the person I am becoming lol! Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/26/2014 5:32:00 AM
Hell knows no fury like a woman scorned. Excellent write Jan. Very different for you which makes it doubly good!
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Date: 12/26/2014 5:34:00 AM
Thanks Maurice I have no idea for the inspiration behind this one - as you say so unlike anything I have written before! Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/26/2014 12:54:00 AM
I like how your poem is hard hitting. It definitely delves into the mind of a woman scorned. Well done, indeed!
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Date: 12/26/2014 3:30:00 AM
I have NO idea where this came from Ty is it so so different to my usual style! It's not based on personal experience lol:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 11:07:00 PM
I love this,just a year for the game planner to hit the Jackpot,too bad,well done Jan. Merry Christmas and goodluck in the contest...huggs
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Date: 12/26/2014 3:29:00 AM
Thanks Kayod5:-) Hugs Jan xxx
Date: 12/25/2014 6:03:00 PM
Well Jan this was very very creative! Loved it!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2014 6:09:00 PM
Thanks Arthur I do appreciate your support:-) Hugs jan xxx
Date: 12/25/2014 5:58:00 PM
Goosebumps all over and a favourite Jan..
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2014 6:01:00 PM
Thanks Charma - this is so unlike me and my usual preference for rhyme and humour! Hugs jan xx
Date: 12/25/2014 5:50:00 PM
Did you cut off anything else? Great write!
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Jan Allison
Date: 12/25/2014 5:56:00 PM
LOL Arthur - goodness knows where this write came from its so unlike anything I have written before! Hugs jan xxx

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