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cutting edge of the pencil

plans incised on plain paper careful calligraphy of a plane sailing high above the clouds shrouded in anticipation veiled in smudges and tears slowly running out of ink resolute fears fuel the fire earthquakes resurface nebulous horizons and I have not the foggiest idea uncertainty shapes a landscape full of thunder and lightening a sinkhole for rainbows handing over completely to what to whom to when a seeming distraction at the foot of the rainbow gold mingles with cold and heaven freezes over

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/28/2025 12:58:00 PM

I enjoy the imagery here. Thanks so much for visiting my poems, Kai.

Sotto Poet

Date: 1/27/2025 12:54:00 PM

What a wonderful poem about the themes of uncertainty, anticipation, and the struggle between hope and despair. It reflects on the tension between dreams and reality, illustrating how plans can be disrupted by unforeseen circumstances.

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 1/28/2025 12:12:00 AM

Thank you for your reply and praise. I appreciate that. Yes, life can throw huge challenges and there are plans to be made and faith to be had. I am past a very challenging time in the last few years. With poetry, I can express my emotions and thoughts. Thank you again, Kai

Tom Woody

Date: 1/27/2025 5:38:00 AM

Oof! Sounds like backsliding. Hang in there. Even a cold rainbow is better than none at all

Tom Woody
Date: 1/27/2025 11:39:00 AM

There are only two Michael - Jehovah and Satan. Any other so-called gods automatically default to the latter

Kai Michael Neumann
Date: 1/27/2025 10:58:00 AM

Not at all quite the opposite. I actually just had a spiritual awakening. Different God from yours I suppose, but definitely a massive one. XXX