Cutting

CUTTING

Blood covers me now;
Razors cut rivers that bleed,
My veins flow freely.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Fraser Avatar
June 4, 2010 at 2:06 PM
Sad piece Marie. I have written a short piece to show my thoughts to your poem. It's called Addressing the dressing >> James
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June 2, 2010 at 12:35 PM
I hope just a write on a topic and not your life..People that have this behavior to handle whatever in their life that is troubling them must really suffer some distress....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara
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June 1, 2010 at 7:54 PM
wow, cool how you said rivers that bleed... depressing a bit lol,, anyways enjoyed this one
Nutter Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 7:26 PM
Spooky and scary Haiku. Very descriptive write of self mutilation.
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