Cutting

CUTTING Blood covers me now; Razors cut rivers that bleed, My veins flow freely.

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James Fraser

Date: 6/4/2010 2:06:00 PM

Sad piece Marie. I have written a short piece to show my thoughts to your poem. It's called Addressing the dressing >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/2/2010 12:35:00 PM

I hope just a write on a topic and not your life..People that have this behavior to handle whatever in their life that is troubling them must really suffer some distress....Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/1/2010 7:54:00 PM

wow, cool how you said rivers that bleed... depressing a bit lol,, anyways enjoyed this one

Anthony Nutter

Date: 6/1/2010 7:26:00 PM

Spooky and scary Haiku. Very descriptive write of self mutilation.