Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Cuts Like a Knife

Today is the first day of the rest of your life
Good or bad, happiness and strife, your choice
Hopefully, it's positive
It's your prerogative
Avoid the stresses that cut like a knife

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Lim'Rik Flats July 7, 2017 at 5:41 PM And that stress that cuts like a saw!//Slow and grinding raw//Naw, gave that up//feel like a pup//of myself I'm sometimes in awe! Wait! That sounds like one of you're lines ;-) CHARGE ON JACKSON!!! Jack Ellison July 8, 2017 at 6:57 AM Be my guest... words are there for everyone! A day late... sorry, SIR JOHN JOHN!!!!

Daniel Turner July 7, 2017 at 5:12 PM So you want to relieve life's stress, some advice so won't make a mess, you could take a pill, or walk a treadmill, The next one I'll let you guess:) Jack Ellison July 8, 2017 at 6:55 AM Sir Dan!!! Walking is the way to extend one's life! I'm a-walking for life and at 82, it's working!!! Cheers Mr. Turner!!!