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Cuteness Overload

neonate so beautiful with eyes full of wonder ever so peaceful mom's pinky tightly on the palm of his tiny hand; glue-like bond between Mom and son as dad looks on, beaming with with euphoric pride (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Date written: 12/11/2022

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 12/13/2022 5:12:00 AM

delightful poem to celebrate a new birth.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/11/2022 9:34:00 PM

Sweet, very beautiful, Edward:)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/12/2022 4:33:00 AM

Thank you very much, Jo:-)

Tania Kitchin

Date: 12/11/2022 4:26:00 PM

Ed, a sweet poem!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/12/2022 4:33:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tania:-)

Susan Lawrence

Date: 12/11/2022 7:57:00 AM

Glorious union of Mother and son with Dad looking on beaming with love ! Beautiful Edward ! Blessings, Susan San :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/11/2022 8:13:00 AM

Thank you very much, Susan:-)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/11/2022 5:58:00 AM

A portrait painted with words. Skillfully scripted in your signature form.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/11/2022 7:22:00 AM

Thank you kindly, Vijay:-)

Jenna Logan

Date: 12/11/2022 5:13:00 AM

Thinking ahead, are you? lol You've created a beautiful image of what you'll be doing soon, and in your own poetic form. Well written, Edward. Hoping everything is going well for all three of you.

Edward Ibeh
Date: 12/11/2022 7:20:00 AM

You guessed right, Jenna lol. Thank you very much indeed!