Edward Ibeh Poet Verse

Cuteness Overload

neonate 
        so beautiful
with eyes
        full of wonder
ever so peaceful
        mom's pinky
tightly
        on the palm 
of his
        tiny hand;
glue-like bond      
between Mom and son
as dad looks on, beaming
        with
with euphoric pride

 (Yalto)

"Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly
Lines 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables
Date written: 12/11/2022

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Reason A. Poteet December 13, 2022 at 5:12 AM delightful poem to celebrate a new birth.

Joanna Daniel December 11, 2022 at 9:34 PM Sweet, very beautiful, Edward:) Edward Ibeh December 12, 2022 at 4:33 AM Thank you very much, Jo:-)

Tania Kitchin December 11, 2022 at 4:26 PM Ed, a sweet poem! Edward Ibeh December 12, 2022 at 4:33 AM Thank you so much, Tania:-)

Susan Lawrence December 11, 2022 at 7:57 AM Glorious union of Mother and son with Dad looking on beaming with love ! Beautiful Edward ! Blessings, Susan San :) Edward Ibeh December 11, 2022 at 8:13 AM Thank you very much, Susan:-)

Vijay Pandit December 11, 2022 at 5:58 AM A portrait painted with words. Skillfully scripted in your signature form. Edward Ibeh December 11, 2022 at 7:22 AM Thank you kindly, Vijay:-)

Jenna Logan December 11, 2022 at 5:13 AM Thinking ahead, are you? lol You've created a beautiful image of what you'll be doing soon, and in your own poetic form. Well written, Edward. Hoping everything is going well for all three of you. Edward Ibeh December 11, 2022 at 7:20 AM You guessed right, Jenna lol. Thank you very much indeed!