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Cute Christmas Couplet

Rudolph’s bladder was bursting, he had nowhere to ‘go’
Please don’t throw any snowballs if you find ‘yellow snow’!

Cute Christmas Couplet
Sponsored by Andrea Dietrich

12/17/18
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Smith Avatar
May 6, 2023 at 3:34 PM
poor Rudolph :)
Callus Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 1:23 PM
Back with congratulations on your podium finish, Jan! Smile eliciting Limericks are winners all the way! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
December 27, 2018 at 1:38 PM
Thanks Paul:-) hugs Jan xx
Cunningham Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 1:18 PM
Back with congratulations Jan, hope your feeling better now. Tom.
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 1:30 PM
Thanks Tom, my appetite is finally returning and I did justice to the roast beef dinner, hubby and son had turkey too. Just demolished melt in the middle choc puds and feel podged lol. Hope you had a wonderful time with the family and the little chap enjoyed his first Christmas:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 1:00 PM
- Congratulations Jan, on your second prize, glory in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 1:02 PM
Thanks so much Anne-Lise:-) hugs jan xx
Gilmour Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 12:39 AM
Haha... that is great Jan, congrats to you on your top win. Have a great Christmas day with kindest thoughts Ann xx
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 2:56 AM
Thanks Ann have a wonderful day:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 9:42 PM
Just stopping back with congratulations on your win in Andrea's contest, Jan. Have a wonderful Christmas with your family! Hugs, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
December 25, 2018 at 2:56 AM
Thanks Carolyn:-) hugs Jan xx
Gondolf Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 7:38 PM
Good one, Jan, congrats on your win. Merry Christmas! John
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 7:40 PM
Thanks John have a wonderful time over the festive period and my very best wishes for 2019:-) hugs jan xx
Hinshaw Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 6:21 PM
I knew this one would rate high, Jan. Congrats for your well-deserved win and thx for your kind comment re my win. Merry Christmas to all!
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 6:24 PM
Thanks Bob I've just read the winning poems there were some real gems lol:-) hugs jan xx
Dietrich Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 4:58 PM
haha, I had a feeling this one might be yours. GREAT couplet, my friend. Congrats on second place.
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 5:05 PM
Thanks Andrea:-) glad it made you smile:-) hugs jan xx
Laurie Avatar
December 19, 2018 at 9:07 PM
G'day Jan … and for God's sake don't eat it! Thanks again Jan - Lindsay
Allison Avatar
December 24, 2018 at 5:04 PM
lol thanks Lindsay:-) hugs Jan xx
Godwin Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 5:55 PM
Love it! Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 5:57 PM
cheers CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx
Dutta Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:32 AM
really cute. Merry Christmas.
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 12:26 PM
Thanks Anisha:-) hugs Jan xx
Babbit Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 11:07 AM
OMG, I loved it, good luck in the contest.
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 12:25 PM
Thanks so much DM:-) hugs Jan xx
Adams Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:35 PM
I like it Jan. Funny and a winner for sure. Well done!!!.....8)
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:01 AM
Thanks Pat:-) hugs Jan xx
Wolf Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 9:30 PM
As my mother used to warn me: "Don't eat the yellow snow!!" LOL. :) gw
Allison Avatar
December 18, 2018 at 7:00 AM
LOL GW:-) hugs Jan xx
Kiser Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:34 PM
Now there's a gem! I suppose a reindeer does get a bit thirsty, flying across the entire world in one night. Luv it!
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 8:07 PM
lol ML:-) hugs Jan xx
Vaso Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:24 PM
Cute!!!!
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 7:28 PM
hee hee:-) hugs Jan xx
Y. Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:16 PM
Lol! Jan, You have penned a funny couplet. Good photo too. I think Andrea will love it. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:24 PM
Thanks so much Alexis:-) hugs Jan xx
Hinshaw Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:11 PM
Love it, Jan - no doubt this will be at the top of the winners list. Thx for your witty comments re my entry. (Not only was Santa fat in the gut, his hind quarters was 2 axe handles wide as we used to say in my home state of Indiana; or as we used to call one in the Air Force who was rather wide in the beam, "Jugbutt")
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 5:23 PM
ha ha ha I've never heard jugbutt lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Devonshire Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:33 PM
Oh my! Great couplet, Jan. I don't expect any snow in Florida, but if I were traveling north, I'd heed this warning. Hugs, Carolyn
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:35 PM
Hope the sun shines for you Carolyn, some of the UK have had snow recently so far we are ok:-) hugs jan xx
Callus Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Really funny, Jan:) I'm sure Andrea will love this. It would be so easy to mistake yellow snow for soft granita! Hugs // paul
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 3:26 PM
ha ha ha love that comment Paul. I'll be wary about having granita when I visit Malta lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Andresen Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:16 PM
- Yours was really yellow and cute, Jan :) - Luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:24 PM
lol Anne-Lise:-) hugs Janxx
Hinshaw Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:39 PM
A cute one indeed, Jan - you got yourself a winner here! Bob
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 1:06 PM
I hope Andrea likes it:-) hugs Jan xx
Gauthier Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 10:33 AM
Always nice to have a Monday morning giggle, Jan.
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:18 PM
I hope Andrea likes it:-) hugs Jan x
Gentile Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 10:02 AM
Yes indeed it is Cute Jan!! Happy Monday xxoo
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2018 at 12:17 PM
Thanks Mike:-) hugs jan xx
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