Curves

This continuing moving point On our ladies shapes Which grace their torso's Facial drapes Hugging hips Body pert in parts Cardiac heaven Men's hearts jump start Shoulders pretty Nape cute The beauty of our women Desirable look Respect our woman It's what they deserve This she creation With those wonderful curves http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/love.php

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/26/2009 3:06:00 PM

Wish all women got the respect they deserve, regardless of their curves, but I do like the way you draw attention to the female form! Excellent poem, James! Love, Carolyn

Charlene Bird

Date: 6/26/2009 7:46:00 AM

A great tribute to the alluring shape of the woman James, and the flow is perfect.

Cesar Cantu

Date: 6/25/2009 8:34:00 PM

Concave crystal is gorgeous, indeed; nice rhymes here, a stupendous tribute!!! thanks a lot for sharing!!!=D=D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/25/2009 4:04:00 PM

I like your poem and the thoughts of respect. Sara

Jo Hayton

Date: 6/25/2009 1:28:00 PM

Its lovely to read a poem about curves, society so wants something different, but do men? Great write James, Jo xx

Date: 6/25/2009 12:37:00 PM

Got me chuckling with this one. Some of those curves are better than others though. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words on my latest. Blessings to you. Karen