James Fraser Poet Rhyme

Curves

This continuing moving point
On our ladies shapes
Which grace their torso's
Facial drapes
 
Hugging hips
Body pert in parts
Cardiac heaven
Men's hearts jump start
 
Shoulders pretty
Nape cute
The beauty of our women
Desirable look
 
Respect our woman
It's what they deserve
This she creation
With those wonderful curves


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Carolyn Devonshire June 26, 2009 at 3:06 PM Wish all women got the respect they deserve, regardless of their curves, but I do like the way you draw attention to the female form! Excellent poem, James! Love, Carolyn

Charlene Bird June 26, 2009 at 7:46 AM A great tribute to the alluring shape of the woman James, and the flow is perfect.

Cesar Cantu June 25, 2009 at 8:34 PM Concave crystal is gorgeous, indeed; nice rhymes here, a stupendous tribute!!! thanks a lot for sharing!!!=D=D

Sara Kendrick June 25, 2009 at 4:04 PM I like your poem and the thoughts of respect. Sara

Jo Hayton June 25, 2009 at 1:28 PM Its lovely to read a poem about curves, society so wants something different, but do men? Great write James, Jo xx

June 25, 2009 at 12:37 PM Got me chuckling with this one. Some of those curves are better than others though. Enjoyed your poem. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind words on my latest. Blessings to you. Karen