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Curtains of My Heart

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My heart is made of lace held fast by Holy fabric strings its red like a pomegranate warm like my Father's love my heart is open like a rose in summer when it sings and when I meet a stranger,... it chances it thereof My heart is volatile like a bird through an open door it beats to pulsed emotions living deep inside my chest finding favor with my soul loving me with sweet adore, it pumps blood inside my chambers, never taking rest This heart of mine is made of love and Holiest of things I spend my time giving true support to those in need if I were Angel my heart would own two quill wings but Angel I am not, although I love to plant the seed, Its only God that can turn a heart into Holy fabric strings Its only God that can turn a heart into a heart that sings.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/29/2020 8:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "Beautiful" Your pen was working overtime on this one. "Love It" Enjoy your win. Today, have joy/blessings....................

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 12/26/2020 9:56:00 PM

I love the last two concluding lines! Congrats on your win!

Robert Lindley

Date: 12/22/2020 7:36:00 AM

My friend your wonderful verses sing of truth, light, faith and the love of God. Such that one must surely be inspired when reading. A fav.. God bless and Merry Christmas..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/21/2020 11:47:00 AM

- Beautifully written, Vie Rose :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2020 12:21:00 PM

Dear Anne, thank you for your beautiful wonderous heart and for the long standing friendship xo

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 12/21/2020 5:56:00 AM

Beautiful words, loving and heartfelt sensing the joy felt from giving back a part of the love God has given you. God B L E S S you

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2020 6:00:00 AM

Dear Regina, your words gladden me. I know that God has touched your heart because I feel the tenderness of your words, may your day be guided by His Blessed light. xo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 12/21/2020 5:47:00 AM

I enjoyed my friend this ode to your angelic heart. Your pulses reverberate in messages of love and peace, Vienna. A beautiful heart wrote this poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2020 5:58:00 AM

Dear Vijay, its Xmas, and I'm feeling the love, despite the world's beat, I am grateful for your kind visit, have a blessed day my friend.

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/21/2020 5:43:00 AM

WoW! Mystic, I enjoyed your well-written Sonnet. Your heart for people shines bright in this write. The latter portion sums your heartfelt message, with emphasis on the last two lines. Best wishes in the contest Well done, my friend. Have a nice day:-) Alexis

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 12/21/2020 5:58:00 AM

Good morning dear Alexis, the heart is one amazing organ, thank you for stopping by, stay beautiful and strong my friend, xo