Curtains

Printed curtains

(billowing rose
 with a light behind
 & a garden scent)

& if they are not roses
(at least)
they have no thorns.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Agustin Avatar
May 10, 2024 at 6:35 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 12, 2016 at 9:46 PM
BAUKE, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
Ink-U-Script Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 2:17 PM
Awesome piece here..love your comment as well.
Kamstra Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 8:08 PM
Thank you. : )
Ink-U-Script Avatar
March 25, 2014 at 2:18 PM
*your response to Paul
Callus Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 7:17 AM
curtain topic...unusual :) it's hard to imagine roses without thorns; that's what makes life what it is. // paul
Kamstra Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 7:51 AM
It is like the surrealist painting "This is not a Pipe." We are so often shrouded in images & words, it seems easy to forget that these are not the real world & have to bring them to mind. : )
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