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Poetic Form: Verse/Enclosed Rhyme
Inspired: 2024 May 07
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Setting: A parlor with money hanging on a wall becomes the topic. Characters: Teen, short boy like to talk down on adult's Woman, passion for hanging money Dialogue: Teen: You've not been in this part of the house, huh? Woman: I'm not nosey or bottled-up--up on the daily's! Teen: Nonsense, silly-willy. Yes-no-not you who me? Woman: Never in a day it'd be you, can't fathom it, aw! Woman: OMgosh! That cannot be money, on your wall? Teen: Of course not, it's where we hang funny money. Woman: Your family, with that money, oh, you go too far. Teen: Okay, it is the real McCoy, kinda bit like you doll! Woman: You lie! Me a doll? Really, Money like legal tender? Teen: A flat board with a couple of cherries on top, hehe! Woman: Money will paint me up. I'm a real dish-o-licious!

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