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Wind swept lofty hills barren of trees blades of tall grass sway in the soft breeze sounds of ocean waves caressing the sandy shore gulls fly overhead swooshing downward on gusts of wind on the hill she stands lost in lonely thoughts sometimes love is lost sometimes love hurts feelings get hidden in waves of regret like the ocean current love can flow or hit an undertow and be pulled under never to resurface again she looked out on the sea of green with regret of what could have been.

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Date: 7/8/2018 9:54:00 PM
Indeed the waves does tranquilize the mind. ----Lovely my dear
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 7/12/2018 1:47:00 PM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Date: 5/16/2018 10:23:00 PM
Phyllis ... a picturesque view to contemplate with Phyllis - thank you - Lindsay
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/17/2018 10:12:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. Did the picturesque view and it did not sound complete so added a little human emotion to it. Have a lovely weekend. love phyl
Date: 5/16/2018 1:39:00 PM
- Wonderfully described, Phyllis - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/17/2018 10:11:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl
Date: 5/16/2018 12:47:00 PM
You paint a lovely seaside landscape Phyllis. I think, although some won't admit it, we all have some regrets. I know I do. Beautifully written and a joy to read.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 5/17/2018 10:10:00 AM
Thanks for your comment. love phyl

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