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There is nothing worse than love except unloved.
It's unclear why I have been moved from desirable to undesirable.
An unaccountable situation not uncommon in the relationship world.
The issue that one has become uncommitted is undeniably
ungracious and unsuitable.
The fact that my possession of an individuals undivided attention 
that has been replaced with uninterested and unclaimed 
makes me uncertain of the existence of the love she claimed.
Am I to understand that she became uncomfortable and unconsolable?
I underestimated unbreakable. Undermining the unwilling unknowing that
the price would be the ultimate. Where was I unrelenting in my cruelty?
I find it unsearchable to see what went unchecked or what parts I left unrequited.
I'll just have to let her go so that she will be unburdened.
Better that than her being unfaithful.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014


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Date: 5/24/2022 9:00:00 PM
With love it is a guessing game how each feel because each is usually scared to say something to the other person in case what they are feeling is wrong. Love is a crazy thing at times. Interesting write. love phyl
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Date: 10/14/2015 7:03:00 PM
Truth in a relationship is always like a balm. An inspirin write
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Date: 6/17/2015 5:05:00 PM
It is a mystery why we fall in love with person [x] and it is another mystery why folks fall out of love? Who knows! Light & Love
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Date: 4/14/2015 12:41:00 PM
Hmm Yor rhyme is awesome here, yor last lines good advice, beta to let them go and part than being unfaithful eh, can be applied for both sexes whoever's partner turns indifferent after the promising love affair. It is so common these fickle passions. Kudos for the appealing way u crafted the poem. Nice to read u again.
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Date: 10/20/2014 11:00:00 PM
This is a great heartfelt write my dear friend TS. I like it so much and i love how you end it. There's saying that if we really love somebody set him/her free. Thank you so much for sharing and your precious time stopping by on my latest experimental poem form. More blessings! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Date: 10/16/2014 9:13:00 PM
it happens all over currently and always been. It seems relationships these days are worth nothing for most people. No one wants to work on them or take them seriously. To some , people are just disposable too just like most things in their lives. Best to you! Xxxx D.
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Date: 10/16/2014 8:13:00 PM
So interesting..So well written...coming from a fresh respective of sadness! 7 Bravo! my best, chuck
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Chuck Melugin
Date: 10/16/2014 8:15:00 PM
I meant perspective.
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