Current Feelings

Empty as a new house
Without the eagerness to move in.
The struggle to breathe
Is almost asthmatic.
Tornado-like force
Sucks away any life within.
The smile on her face, so fake
Yet a plastic surgeon would be fooled.

But they don't care
They never did care..
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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March 7, 2014 at 2:17 PM
chokingly sad ... is there anyone who cares?
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