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Curled Around Love

in the sweet echo of love,
       these moments in between, 
feel the melody of me  . . 
    let me slowly cradle around your song  

- come, and get lost in my depth -  
 
    close your eyes as i whisper,
this is where you belong

________



~ A little message hidden within ~ (Hint- the words in bold)
- a romantic little scribble -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 5:46 PM
Love's song has a sweet melody, Wonderful write Brandy, all the best for the New Year, Blessings
Nicole Avatar
January 4, 2024 at 6:20 PM
So true, Joseph. When love 'curls' around the heart, it's such a beautiful moment. The melody is breathtaking. Thank you for kind words and wishes. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Gondolf Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 3:02 PM
This is so romantic, Brandy, I can hear your whispers echoing in the wind. John
Nicole Avatar
May 15, 2019 at 10:20 PM
Thank you John. Such a wonderful thing to say. :) I appreciate you and your thoughts. ~ Brandy
One Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 7:39 AM
Simple beatufiul.. there is a hidden message in all words my sweet friend..
Nicole Avatar
March 3, 2019 at 8:19 AM
Thank you Silent One. True, there is a hidden message in all words. I appreciate your thoughts. ~ Brandy
Smith Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 3:44 AM
Very beautiful
Nicole Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 12:40 PM
Thank you Tim. I appreciate your kindness. ~ Brandy
Man Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:09 PM
Deep and romantic.. your writes cause me to pause over many words or phrases and contemplate the meaning/feeling. I like your little hidden message as well :)
Nicole Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 11:22 PM
Thank you Lyric Man. Sometimes, less is so much more. Words should tangle around the heart and leave you feeling amazing inside. :) I am happy that you liked the hidden message. ~ Brandy
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