Curl

Hurl
Whirl
Curl


Watch wit
Bind fit
Frame hit


Love sows right
To reap bright
In swift flight


Watch word wit frame
How touch breeds game
In praise or blame


Glimpse poise in calm proof
Watch to see plain truth
Death is that sure roof





Leon Enriquez
13 September 2019
Singapore
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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November 2, 2024 at 3:46 AM
**Colors in the Sky** *by Theresa Lynn © 2024* Festive fireworks foraging forcefully, firework flames... flashing, floating, fading. Families figure favorite fashions. Friends find fizzling firecrackers. Fireworks feature fantastic forms. Frozen faces fathom fascinating festivities! --- Theresa Lynn’s poem uses vivid alliteration to capture the energy and magic of fireworks lighting up the night. Each line brings out the excitement of these "fantastic forms," while phrases like “Frozen faces fathom fascinating festivities” conjure images of awe-struck spectators. This playful piece captures the thrill and warmth of shared celebrations under a sky lit with brilliant colors.
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November 2, 2024 at 3:26 AM
I found Curl by Leon Enriquez as a short, rhythmic meditation on the flow and force of emotions, actions, and life’s inevitable cycles. Each stanza reads almost like an incantation, with simple, one-syllable words—Curl, Hurl, Whirl—conveying movement and energy, setting a dynamic tone.
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November 13, 2024 at 8:39 AM
Dear Joel: Thank you. Leon
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