Toquyen Harrell Poet Free verse

Curious

I want to write a poem about a boy I like
I don’t know whether we are going to be together
As we don’t even talk
I know I like him
And he knows I like him
So what is the deal?
I don’t know
No one moves
Stand still
I don’t know if my interest will keep
Or I will move on
What takes men so long to do something?
Do they have to think things over?
Well I don’t know if I have the patience
Or the time
It seems too much trouble 
For what it is worth
Do I want to deal with it?
Ahh God knows
I don’t even know

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Robert Lindley May 11, 2014 at 11:46 PM Very nice offering. Most often men hesitate due to fear of rejection! Give him better cues and he'd probably leap! I remember leaping often as a young man. And it was pure joy! Toquyen Harrell May 12, 2014 at 5:29 PM Yeah, how high would he leap? lol. Thanks, Robert.

Tim Smith May 11, 2014 at 8:41 PM Men fear the unknown. Tell him you like him...Tim Toquyen Harrell May 11, 2014 at 10:58 PM If he doesn't get it, he will never get it. Thanks, Tim :)

Jeremy Street May 11, 2014 at 8:01 PM He's Probably Very Shy ? Perhaps, Or Just Wading Through Her Waters Wondering, Is This Lady Real ? Is She As Hot, As She Seems ? Hang In There Baby Girl! Love, Jeremy * Toquyen Harrell May 11, 2014 at 10:57 PM Ha. Thanks, Jeremy :)