Notes About The Poem

Bitesize Poetry Contest #149

Sponsor: Line Gauthier

Honorable Mention

Judged: July 28th, 2026

curious

look away from me
gaze fixed with expectations
drink the sunset now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Kauffman Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 11:57 AM
Trina, in three lines you tell a story of angst between two people. So much in your three lines. Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
Layne Avatar
July 29, 2026 at 3:01 PM
Appreciated, Sam :)
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