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Cupids Sin

CUPID’S SIN gown of midnight blue twinkling stars regale her neck her hair ~ a cocoa moon her red-lip kisses ~ cupid’s arrows hit bullseye man’s collar askew and spectacles piqued ~ his magnifying glasses tremble at her form married man’s weak pulse she smiles like a shooting star his knees venerate forgotten promise price of Cupid’s escapade? paid with wedding ring 12/13/2017

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Date: 2/8/2018 10:20:00 PM
Great job, Kim.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/8/2018 10:36:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/14/2017 8:59:00 PM
Oh wow! Definitely a unique angle on Cupid. Love how you have dressed this piece!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/14/2017 9:56:00 PM
Thank you, Shadow!
Date: 12/13/2017 9:46:00 PM
:-) lovely , Kim. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 9:55:00 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Date: 12/13/2017 3:22:00 PM
The temptation of the forbidden pleasures must be avoided at all costs.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 8:02:00 PM
For sure!
Date: 12/13/2017 1:44:00 PM
You know they say Cupid is blind.. This is a great set of senryus..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/13/2017 8:02:00 PM
Thank you, Silent!

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