Cupids Sin

CUPID’S SIN gown of midnight blue twinkling stars regale her neck her hair ~ a cocoa moon her red-lip kisses ~ cupid’s arrows hit bullseye man’s collar askew and spectacles piqued ~ his magnifying glasses tremble at her form married man’s weak pulse she smiles like a shooting star his knees venerate forgotten promise price of Cupid’s escapade? paid with wedding ring 12/13/2017
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Payton Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:20 PM
Great job, Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 8, 2018 at 10:36 PM
Thank you!
Thomas Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Oh wow! Definitely a unique angle on Cupid. Love how you have dressed this piece!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 14, 2017 at 9:56 PM
Thank you, Shadow!
Roper Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 9:46 PM
:-) lovely , Kim. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 9:55 PM
Thank you, Eve! xx
Gondolf Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 3:22 PM
The temptation of the forbidden pleasures must be avoided at all costs.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 8:02 PM
For sure!
One Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 1:44 PM
You know they say Cupid is blind.. This is a great set of senryus..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 13, 2017 at 8:02 PM
Thank you, Silent!
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