Cupid's Joyride

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Cupid's Joyride Emitting star, meteor, act alike, Some piece gleams a sky, oust our atmosphere, Bow bends, arrow aims our sky ere a strike, Cupids arrow tips when pierced are dreamlike, Heirs beguiled senseless on a plains calm mere, Emitting star, meteor, act alike, Evolve cherub charioteer, fine tyke, The cosmos hooves gallop the heavens clear, Bow bends, arrow aims our sky ere a strike, Late evening dusk, well beyond its midnight, Cupids and cherubs, together they cheer, Emitting star, meteor, act alike, Rounded azure foresees, unleashed star bright, The host of arrows emanating near, Bow bends, arrow aims our sky ere a strike, Heaven besieged midst an utter delight, Stars hurled, meteors bounce, the whole appear Emitting star, meteor, act alike, Bow bends, arrow aims our sky ere a strike. 2019 August 17 *2nd Place* Shooting Stars ~~Nayda Ivette Negron

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/17/2019 3:05:00 AM

This is out of this world William. I could imagine the starlit show. Great imagery! Best for a contest win my friend!Aloha! : ) xxoo

Hilo Poet
Date: 8/17/2019 3:12:00 AM

At this hour, it's just us, not lonely--just a tad crowded--hehe, hope to bump into your daughter and send her some business from this wretched burden ~ Aloha, William