Cupid's Arrow

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No hearts and flowers for me on Valentine's Day,
so Cupid, don't take aim with your arrows.
My heart will not allow love to sweep me away.

For past passion there was a profuse price to pay.
I was wounded in the breast like a felled sparrow.
No hearts and flowers for me on Valentine's Day.

He destroyed my love with evil words not held at bay,
and snuffed it out like a candle flame atop the tallow.
'tis why my heart will not allow love to sweep me away.

There is no consolation for the sorrowful blame I lay
upon the shoulders of the man who acted like Pharaoh.
No hearts and flowers for me on Valentine's Day.

All the love I had to give was loaded upon my heart's dray,
and he dumped it in the gutter like dung in a wheelbarrow.
My heart will not allow love to ever sweep me away.

Hear me, Cupid, and don't try to lead my heart astray.
I've already been crushed and plowed as if by a harrow.
No hearts and flowers for me on Valentine's Day.
My heart will not allow love to sweep me away.


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January 22nd 2016
Valentine's Villanelle Contest
Sponsored by Dave Will

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 2/25/2016 11:20:00 AM
Simply adorable Lin! Congrats!
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Date: 2/25/2016 11:26:00 AM
Thank you so much, Balveen, and I meant every last word of it! lol
Date: 2/25/2016 10:10:00 AM
Valentine Villanelles almost sweet as apple jelly now read on winners’ page..You are quite the sage..Sweet Congrats..Sara
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Date: 2/25/2016 10:18:00 AM
Thank you, Sara.
Date: 2/25/2016 7:58:00 AM
An amazing poem it is!!!! Congrats on your placement in the contest Lin!!! ;-)
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Date: 2/25/2016 8:15:00 AM
Thank you very much, Teddy.
Date: 2/23/2016 10:00:00 PM
Wow a lovely poem Lin.. no wonder a great win.. big congrats!
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Date: 2/24/2016 3:24:00 AM
Hi, Upma. Your comment is very kind and I thank you.
Date: 1/23/2016 5:41:00 PM
You tell a sad tale here! Powerful words! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 1/23/2016 5:49:00 PM
Yeah, I'm afraid I'm a real downer on Cupid...lol sorry, but thanks for your comment, Matthew.
Date: 1/23/2016 3:13:00 AM
now i guess valentine's going to be spent in-doors, excellent villanelle Lin
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Date: 1/23/2016 7:19:00 AM
It's just another day to me, Sage. I appreciate your many wonderful comments. ;)
Date: 1/22/2016 11:16:00 AM
Love it Lin...I have written an anti-valentines day poem in the past.
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:28:00 PM
Hi, and thanks, Tim. I can't write it any other way, and I'm glad to hear you did one in the past. It's nice to see you.
Date: 1/22/2016 11:06:00 AM
A brilliant VILLANELLE! Beautifully constructed in true form. Well done Lin! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 1/22/2016 1:27:00 PM
Thanks for such accolades, Keith. I really appreciate your comments.
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