Cupidity

Should I speed my loving shafts, to see
them penetrate the blind periphery
of your happy unawareness,
Would you slam, with horror and with haste,
your portals of defence, with much distaste
at the wiles of such unfairness?

Or would those fragile barbs release sweet gall,
to rouse from slumberous state some answering call,
as one in sleep caressed -
Perfidious seeping of love’s wanton balm
to activate sweet turmoil in that calm
and brutal torpor in your breast.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 7/26/2017 8:19:00 PM
Reminds me of the Immortal Bard himself! A nice little write, Hilary. Keep on with the good work. My best regards - Cheers! : ) john
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Hilary Aziz
Date: 7/27/2017 12:46:00 AM
thanks you, john, for the confidence boost! Hilary
Date: 8/2/2016 11:31:00 AM
Nice pen 7, Louis.
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Hilary Aziz
Date: 8/20/2017 2:27:00 AM
a rather belated thank you, Louis!
Date: 5/4/2016 9:13:00 AM
ha, I love it. SKAT--
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Hilary Aziz
Date: 7/27/2017 12:48:00 AM
appreciate your appreciation!
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