Cupidity

Should I speed my loving shafts, to see
them penetrate the blind periphery
of your happy unawareness,
Would you slam, with horror and with haste,
your portals of defence, with much distaste
at the wiles of such unfairness?

Or would those fragile barbs release sweet gall,
to rouse from slumberous state some answering call,
as one in sleep caressed -
Perfidious seeping of love’s wanton balm
to activate sweet turmoil in that calm
and brutal torpor in your breast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Fleming Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 8:19 PM
Reminds me of the Immortal Bard himself! A nice little write, Hilary. Keep on with the good work. My best regards - Cheers! : ) john
Aziz Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 12:46 AM
thanks you, john, for the confidence boost! Hilary
Borgo Avatar
August 2, 2016 at 11:31 AM
Nice pen 7, Louis.
Aziz Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 2:27 AM
a rather belated thank you, Louis!
A  Avatar
May 4, 2016 at 9:13 AM
ha, I love it. SKAT--
Aziz Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 12:48 AM
appreciate your appreciation!
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