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Cupid Crowns You King of Creeps

I crown you the king of stupid
Messing with a love that cupid
Sent your way for you to hold
But you have been very cold
Freezing her heart till it makes
Shattered pieces that just break
A loving woman's will to live
There's nothing else she can give
Her care showed through every day
With her actions she would say
How much you meant in her life
Never causing pain or strife
Thinking her love was enough
But you were so mean and gruff
Even through the months of sorrow
She'd be by your side tomorrow
Trying to give all she had
Through the good and all the bad
You just see her loving side
Not the tears she always cried
Wondering what she was doing
That you couldn't see her proving
Her desires and devotion
What ever gave you the notion
To push her love to the curb
Making you slowly disturb
The feelings she had way down deep
That you didn't want to keep
Now she's gone leaving you with
An empty feeling in the pit
Of your lonely soul that seeps
Because you were such a creep

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 12/1/2013 2:15:00 PM
Wow what a great and cleverly written poem you have her my dear Robin!! My goodness, such a brilliant poem! Well put my dear Robin! great write! That creep! lol happy thanksgiving by the way my dear! apologizes for not commenting in a while! Hugs and kisses and love from the blue poet! xoxoxo :) :)
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Date: 11/30/2013 10:24:00 PM
way to tell it!! That creep!!!
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Date: 11/27/2013 10:47:00 PM
Great write. As I was reading this poem I thought about the husbands that think they've been blind sided when their wife's ask for a divorce, and I thought to myself these men should read your poem and see if the shoe fits.
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Date: 11/27/2013 6:32:00 PM
I am sure that everyone can relate to the feelings of frustration that you expressed so well here. Love bites sometimes! I really like this poem, Robin, so I am going to fave it! :)
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Date: 11/27/2013 9:44:00 AM
Awesome title about a difficult subject. Well done, and probably helps to relieve.
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