Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Cupid Aims His Arrow

Cupid aims his arrow
   Hunter with his bow
Thinks he: It's a simple matter
   Of his weapon aimed just so...

Love's not such easy prey
   To be captured with one shot
She demands more time, more patience
   Than any Cupid's got

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Tom Cunningham November 15, 2018 at 8:44 AM She demands more time and patience, so very true Gershon. We on the other hand don't need time lol. Tom. Gershon Wolf November 15, 2018 at 4:34 PM I love the cutting edge of your second sentence, Tom. I'm grinning a smile as wide as the Grand Canyon. Always a delight to hear from you! Best wishes, Gershon

Vladislav Raven November 14, 2018 at 4:50 PM Hi Gershon, a wonderful piece my friend. Cupid is not always as sure as people would think. A most creative write. I enjoyed the read. Love savours so slowly, the way into the heart. have a wonderful Thursday. your friend....Mike. Gershon Wolf November 14, 2018 at 7:09 PM I consider this high praise from a romantic poet like yourself. Thank you so much for your encouragement, Mike! Best wishes, Gershon